Hello Tony: Murder in a Small Town sounds like a classic mystery . The one thing I didn't get is, in paragraph twenty-three, you say "What’s crazy is how much I didn’t care about her before I knew she existed." Why would you? Why would anyone care about someone if they didn't know they existed?
TYPOS: All numbers.
5th para: 1st sent: Change "13" to "thirteen."
14th para: 1st sent: Change "10" to "ten."
14th para: 3rd sent: Change "16" to "sixteen."
22nd para: 3rd sent: Change "23" to "twenty-three."
Hello Tony: Murder in a Small Town sounds like a classic mystery . The one thing I didn't get is, in paragraph twenty-three, you say "What’s crazy is how much I didn’t care about her before I knew she existed." Why would you? Why would anyone care about someone if they didn't know they existed?
TYPOS: All numbers.
5th para: 1st sent: Change "13" to "thirteen."
14th para: 1st sent: Change "10" to "ten."
14th para: 3rd sent: Change "16" to "sixteen."
22nd para: 3rd sent: Change "23" to "twenty-three."
Okay. Now I get it.